FILM PITCH

The first document shows are first film pitch draft where we had to produce a document explain what are horror movie is about by giving a synopsis to example what are horror is about. At first we decide to do a paranormal horror inculding the devil with to boys people coming viticms of the lake. We was going to do this by trying use some special effect such as make trees fall and the water ripple in the lake. We was going to use to boys because boys normally like football and they was going to play football as they where bored and had nothing to do so we was being stereotypical. The reason why we decide to use paranormal was because she looked at are questionnaire and realised that most of the age rage we was aiming at liked paranormal movies.



Down below is are feedback we got from are film pitch from are peers we took everyone thoughts into consideration and decide to make a number of changes. We changed are sub genre to a slasher/paramoraml as it would be easier to construct in the environment we was filming so we have to change the number a the log line and synopsis  to make it more conventional of horror.Also we found out that it might be a bit difficult to carry out some paranormal shot as they many difficult to do without having any special effect which could happen so we kept so elements to make to the open scene more mysterious for the audience to try and find out what is actually cause the weird thing which are happen and who is doing them. Moreover, we had to change the character and the reasons why we chose to do this. Furthermore we need to include more on the story in are synopsis as a lot of the feedback we got said we show give more away from peers like stacey and Arthur.

Down below is are changed  film pitch from the feedback we received first of all as we wasn't  doing anything that involve the devil as it would be hard to follow out some paranormal activities such as the water rippling and branches falling. So we change the titlle to stranger by the lake as the horror was going to be a young girl getting caught and killed by a mysterious man how kills anyone that comes to the lake then we had to change are sub genre to a slasher as he would cut the viticms all over their body to torture them. Therefore, we changed are synopsis to a young girl being the victim as this is more conventional in horror in Texas chain saw mascara the main victim is a girl and scream they are also a girl being killed by males. The reason for change is because of the feedback we got as it would be more easy to carry out the shot we where gonna use in this horror also it would make it more interesting to mix up to sub-genre to make the audience question if it is a slasher or paranormal horror. Making the audience relate to the narrative theory enigma code